aight i'm peepin now
LOL at the Wu-Tang beat
i love this beat
Whats Hot:The intro is hot..i like the mixing so far
The Lyrics
The Change-ups remind me of JR Writer unpolished
Whats Good:The Quality,The pressense is good
Whats Ok:THe emotion is lackin a little if you had more emotion this'd remind me of some JR Writer/Cam'Ron/Juelz Santana shit on the real
Whats Off:nothing u did everything well just work on that
Whats Wack:absolutley nothin
Overall:this is a good track...I like it....lyrics are good....for a finals round you should've came a lil bit harder like somthing more....the end where you go off with that freestyle is pretty hot.......seriously...where you sped up thats was pretty damn hot u should've came like that all the way through......i like the end outro........
This is pretty tight
Second part was the best
8/10
-Past Tense aka PT