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Old 08-21-06, 10:53 PM   #14
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A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: S. Lena

youll probably win.......sike from start you finished dude
worse then the system, that has more wins then you
[bold]No....dude thats played/whack 0/10[/bold]
got your vocab from payless, we all know there generic
you must be premature, cause your verse is so pathetic
[bold]Pathetic/premature..off topic no punch 0/10[/bold]
kreminds me of a toilet cause i'm shitting inside this dude
get a navigator for rap, oh shit even that cant guide you
[bold]Decent could have worded it better 4/10[/bold]

Overall: Im not impressed man you came whack and weak no hate just think you need less generic lines and more lines wittier and with meaning....you had 1 good attempt at a punch but it was played and worded badd....ehh overall like 3/10 dog





I'm ill, kid. I'm always spitting shit so insane
So watch me son Jay, like I was flippin' your name
[bold]Nice name play ...kinda played 4/10[/bold]
You wanted to do more lines, but 6 is more my taste
I tried to dumb it down a bit, but your verse beat me to the chase!
[bold]Not bad...again kinda played but 5/10[/bold]
Your raps are all garbage, kid, you'll never make it big
and you ain't flirting with wackness, yo, you're married to it kid!
[bold]Not feeling it really meh 1/10[/bold]

Overall: Much stronger verse than you opponent though you had some played concepts they were still wittier and more appealing imo. Keep doing your thing this was a 1 sided battle no doubt

v/s. lena

rtf please and thank you
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