iighty...

Hook - Lacking emotion and feeling, need to fix that right away, lyrics is pretty cool though i like what is said, just not how its said

Cool story tellin type flow, laid back, could have been a lil hyper but thats probably just your flow so its str8 for this typea song. Lyrics are pretty strong rhyme scheme's kinda plain.

Overall its an above average track, just a little more emotion on the hook would make it stronger.

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