ok so the beat sounds cool. theres nothing spectacular about it though

the hook honestly i dont like. the notes are way off so the different voices dont mesh too well. you need to find notes that will blend in with each other. you cant jus throw onions and ice cream in a bowl and expect it to taste good. know what i mean?

as for the verses. the first verse was real plain. but i like that laid back style so that was cool. lyrically it was okay too.

second verse i like the switch of styles. you came out with a cool quick flow and then slowed it down as the first one was.


overall the song was cool. not the best but it was good. the only complaint really is the hook.