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Old 08-24-06, 12:14 AM   #5
I Am Unreal.
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I liked this piece man, not as much as some of your others but I feel the emotion here. It's about an expectant mother ruining the life of her child before said "life" actually begins.. What a shame. Nice piece though, well structured and good use of words to keep the reader's attention.
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