Had we never come across the vastness of pavement
The barrenness of waves and the grayness of the sea
Never lost or ne'er been misguided
We'd have ne'er reached seas so shining

Or come from out of a hansom in Camden
To a bar in the basement
While all the while it rained
Or come around to the friendliest of faces
Handsomest in ugly places

Or come from out of the tunnels we dig in
To see that tunneling's not living
And working doesn't work
Or come to find that loving is labor
Labor's life and life's forever
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my FAV. lines

your emotino was well done in her painted a nice image and that really helped me out in this poetic feel...the stroy was well well done1.....really creative i liked most of your lines aswell with that twist in plot shit. though some was kinda meh in wording but it didnt slow this dro pdown at all1....nice do my dude man you got this off well and never looked back AT ALL!

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