It's not bad I guess, kind of lost you on a few bits,

**Opener was ok, it flowed, not much word play or multies,. just lacking
a little complexity but it will come in time**

AK47 make ya whole block num
im workin big chips yeen workin wit nun
why i dont kno u shood ask ya son
i kno bout nines n shiit cuse i got me one

***Don't know what is it, it don't rhyme or nothing*****

yeen bout throwin da handZ
mo like bitch talkin
den runnin 2 ya momma crib

*** this was good, could up vocab a little & spell word correctly
no hate by the way***

cuse u kno how my hood do
on da low low but stil doin it googa loo
u wanna battle dude ima hurt chu
mo den a virgin loosen day virginty foo

Anyway this was alright, keep writing stay active and holla at me if you need
any help elevating.

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