good looking out on the feedback
but i need more feedback
fuck the nice vocab and metaphors
this is the real reason i chose to be a rapper for
it feels like my mind is trapped with war
to the point i dont respect if that is yours
cause when i put 2 fingers up im scrapping whore
and i aint talkin about the fuck you that will leave faggots sore
all you see on my street is cops at door
cause we all on the same hustle that'l leave pockets warm
if you think im not real you must be misinformed
cause i spit shit that'l make sockets form
the niggas on my block would just be amazed to walk in a prada store
and we here loud things at night like a thunder storm
the rain falls from the sky,like tears from our mothers eye
cause she working a 5 to 5 and still struggling even when my brother try
so now i got a step father so we have help from another guy
saying shit got better would just be another lie
cause more money means more problems
cause i spend my money on the littlest shit like condoms

im sorry i had to cuss alot but this is real talk
rapping is like a movement and nomatter how wack you say i am i still walk
like bone crusher i never get scared ..i got the chilled heart
i come harder than im already am like a steel shark
i aint got nothing more to say so ima leave this at a question mark
like a bad break up this is where the depression starts
i stay active like teen sex
and wants to get big like a blonde teens breast
this is best said then written for respect
so like ass on the mic im about to start shittin in text