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Old 08-25-06, 05:01 PM   #14
TonyTone
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hmmm.....
needs a more laid back swagger for this kinda track. iunno why but i seems like u were reading the lyrics in a few places. nice story though, flow's on point. hook is missin somethin cuz when i first heard it i didnt even realize it was the hook lol it is sorta catchy though. emotion's good, im likin ya delivery. turn down the dubs just a tad bit. besides production is pretty good. not my kinda beat btw but w/e u came nice on it. keep droppin
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