lol @ intro..

first dude.. his quality ill. emotion ain't there tho. Could be much more. Delivery pretty coo. like his lyrics. got a nice flow too. rtickin' like a time bomb..

hook......... i like it..... LOL he sound liek 50 on hook.

9th, you ain't even worth the pencil I'm writing with. lmao i liked that. flow coo, go off on some points, but throughout it's good. lyrics are ill tho. Delivery coo. vocals a lil loud. But i like this verse better than first.

hook again..

lol @ dude sounding like 50 tho. in hook and outro..

but can't really understand outro shit.

but overall this wasn't that bad man. beat was ill tho. good shit. lyrics were nice. good diss. nice track overall man. hook could use some effects to vocals to make it stand out more.

but not bad. 8.3/10

RTF:
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*One Shot*

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