What's hot:
Beat, sound like mockingbird beat a lil lol
You got good delivery on this

What's coo:
flow was pretty coo here.
emotion could be upped. like change your pitch on some parts, nah mean?
hook was coo. but I think you should put some effect no it to make it stand out tho
lyrics are nice. I liked this

what's not:
nothing

overall man. I like this. you got good voice for this type of track too. last verse i like the flow a lot. def your best verse. Lyrics tight in it. word @ next time you say rap is weak. overall good shit man. stay up. 8.2/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233921

EZ

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