1st Verse - man i'm feelin wut u sayin bout people tellin ya to stop......ya lyrics are nice on this.....flow is fine........yea ya delivery helps out da verse
Hook - good hook.....sums up da message of ya track
2nd Verse - ya lyrics again are nice......ya vocals nice too.....ya flow kinda started soundin like Eminem, the 4th bar to like da 6th........
Hook - Same as above
3rd Verse - flow on this verse is da best........i'm feelin this verse the most.......nice drop homie

overall - i would mos definitely bump this..........keep droppen SPuL.....

pz

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