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Old 08-25-06, 07:03 PM   #16
FlowIntelligent.
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Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
^^good concept alright punch
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
^^another good concept wasnt feeling the wording

vs.

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
^^this was a good punch here
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
^^i liked this also .. witty good concept


Aerals punches were good but i felt they coulda been worded better, lost some effectiveness but nonetheless still a couple good punches. Tav had some good punches both were witty with good concepts


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