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Old 08-25-06, 08:40 PM   #17
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Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
..naw son. shitz madd play'd..
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
..lolz! @ first i didn't get this, only cause u had "so for you" where i thought ur rhyme would be. then i got pointed out, it wasn't the rhyme. so not bad. pretty cool..

vs.

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
..a lil play'd. i've seen punches similar to this. not bad though..
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
..lolz, nice. i liked it. ya revised old wordplay and made it dope..

tav had one good punch, while aeral had 2 good ones. hmm.. this wasn't too hard. tav, ur first punch was mad play'd and the wordin on ya second one almost caused me to even miss the rhyme. work on that, yo. aeral, some witty shit. i really liked ya feed. thats what won u the match, imo.

v/ aeral
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