tony green -- wat up, this track is str8 it seems sorta cliche with the first line, but its a koo track flow was koo i liked it but nothing exciting...maybe u eed more emotion? sound like ur meaning wat u tryn to say.

yvonne -- hmm i wont take it ez so imma be real, it was aight at best not to be disrspectful but everything u said is something i heard before just in deifferent words in..other words im tryn to say u should find different way to say thingz and ya need to up ya vocab... ur flow is nice no complaints but i guess its tha same for u add more emotion and add vocab to ur trax u got potential girl the beggining of ur verse u was choppy then u actually started flowin so big upz

both of u can elevate just try harder!!

i aint being an ass im just being real accept it anyway u want.....

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