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Old 08-26-06, 01:36 PM   #2
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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ok i liked the flow and the beat kinda caus eit was different the delivery on the hook i like the third verse the ebst rhyme scheme was killing it
need to upp the volume on the hook its hard to hear
"yous a never was you cant be a has been"
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