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Old 08-26-06, 01:44 PM   #2
Willa
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ok beat obviously iv heard it cool shit
flow is off a little bit in the beginning o your verse but it gets better you kinda mumble some words
hook first line kinda sounds off beat besides that its pretty cool lol is the screwed part sayign fuck chevy's?
el ray you osund a little too loud flow is pretty much on but its not too smooth
lyrically you were pretty hot
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