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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
-Beat
I dont like it its too mainstream lol j/p
but yeah
Vato - Your quality is good....your flow is a little choppy in some parts...your lyrics are good...your emotion is good...u kinda lack pressense in this song..it was okay tho
you did a okay job for this
hook-I dont know it just didnt catch my attention........thats what the hooks sposed too do.....work on the melody a little....the flow was off a little bit
El Rey - I am more and more suprized every time i hear you..I liked the lyrics...but i understand how u 'dont wanna get the fame' and how mainstream 'party' music is bad...but you gotta realize thats how hip hop started..too get the party MOVIN!!
well anyways flow was good and everything else was good.....u came harder then VATO
overall-decent track..iono didn't really seem like a song sounded like somthing ya'll just did in a hurry..not to bad tho...keep it up
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