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Old 08-27-06, 01:48 PM   #9
J. Luth
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lol I konw this beat like it. Forget who it was tho. but good shit

first verse... nice delivery and emotion. flow coo kinda choppy in places, but for most part it was good.

hook, ehh iunno i guess it was alright. wasn't bad, wasn't good. just aiight

second verse, damn you improve everytime i hear you yo. flow choppy tho in places, like you rush some places. it's ok, but gotta improve that. But lyrics were pretty coo. sounded like Jay-Z in end of verse lol. but verse was coo

hook again, ehh shit kinda growing on me. lol it's coo actually. I just think doing it once would be good, twice overdid it.

but overall, not a bad joint by y'all man. Pretty good listen. both y'all improving at a fast rate, so that's always good. so stay up. 8/10

Vato RTF on this if you could:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233921
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