I don't lose
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got ya stunna shades on?.....nah but really not gon leave too much feed except that the verses sounded a lil.......plain i think is the word i want to use.....with a beat like this i feel you need a lil more backround noise or something to keep it hype a bit at least to keep intrest in it....i did like the hook tho....still say maybe some backround noise would help......its nothing too major and still just a personal opinion.....i unno thats my word
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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