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not bad man, had some cool lines and overall this was solid, i think your main problem is wording, some of these lines just werent worded well, it has nothing to do with your vocab and what words you used its how you used them, it just didnt come off natural and shit. but keep dropping dude. hit up my sweet dreams piece if you can
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