This is a str8 and dark drop...vocabs always good. I aint one to judge OM coz I dont know much about writing one really but yours is tight. just gotta slow down the turn of events. the way I do that is by trying to give each even atleast an entire bar or 2. still a str8 drop

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..