wow, surprising man. Your hook is so catchy, I like the effects you gave it. Your lyrics are pretty good, nice comical lines in there. Your delivery is hot and I've always enjoyed your voice. the beat is pretty killa, not bad man overall I like this joint. I wouldn't mind hearin you spit a solo on some deep kinda story shit. I know you like to extend your horizons, do that up sometime. just a idea anyway good job.
rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234211
*tito the farfetched*