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Old 08-29-06, 07:56 PM   #18
VatoXL
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Listen'n ah ha lol i was gonna rock this beat a minute ago but i aint do it...

Shit is sick

1st: Delivery sick.... presence on point...like you swazzzyy type flow u know what it is...content nice...emotion was there...

HoOk: Like this dope kid...content official

2nd: Better than the first...lyrics is nutz man but ive always like ur lyrics everything fits something i need to work on hahahahaha....sike! delivery official..

HoOk: Same

3rd: Not as good as the 2nd but cocky...like that delivery bout this verse...got the angermangement in u lol....but ur lyrics deffinitly shine better than the second u had more to say ..... but the way u kicked the second was dope...

HoOk: Same

Over-all
Nice mix kid everything blended well which i neva see that problem when i listen to ur shit man...vocals on point ab-libs on point not louder so they over-ride...over all concept of the track was the shit...job well done my dude...Keep it 100 an stay droppin...

Ratin 9/10
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