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Old 08-31-06, 02:03 AM   #12
Brock Sampson
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L.I.

concept flippin? quit jokin, wordz aint stuntin
kids more of a gimmick then the match he wanted
bitch listen. kids dont believe what ya spittin
cause there is Ahgod. . & he made everyone ditch religion
your a weaker division. i gave you the 1-2-1 win, hoe please
im glad you'll be 4-1 there. . now you will match in both leagues
leave dude scarred. heres a compliment beyond threats
you resemble Butler, $pit, n shh! with half their concepts
i dont forget. you get no shine in the mag, thats some finish
you made a name for urself in the cypher. . as the worst in it

-VS-

Wordz..

So we could drop with no gimicks - Truth is ...I wanted to make it fun
Nick said L.I.s a dick head ...When really - he was just craving for one
I peep'd the stormwatch ...weatherchannel sees none ahead
He told his crew they still alive ----> Its just the thread thats dead
This nerds stress'd - I cut skin off em' to hand em' a tissue
And I'll whipe my ass with Kemps mag ...just to help him press this issue
His rib cage'll crack from pressure - I flow like Pasaidon
I'Dizzle dont come for the L ...But theres always one right besides him

Ok....L.I. had some here n there and overall....not bad. The ones I quoted were cool to me...but the name droppin line almost didn't get quoted tho. I see that often and Im not in every league! Wordz....ya wording there is crazy to me...the set up dosent mesh with the punches well? Besides that...I thought the concepts & personals were o.k. Ya opener wasn't "on & poppin" tho...the wordplay was......ight. Wheel Chair you in the face like old people? they may ride in one but there not gonna chair you in the face....unless ya Grandmas RUTHLESS!! "G's" up NIGGA!

Anyways...V/ L.I.

Wordz...it was ya wording to me that lost it for you.
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