Untold:

u like tortilla's punches?! i guess u think his voice is tight
cuz it ironic @ it bein the second best u seen.. but ur first choise to bite
lol this made me laugh. good line 8/10
jacks gotta be hungry, cuz i can hear his stomach shoutin with in
son, ur supposed to chew chips.. not just bite the FUCK out of them
lol coo 7/10
ya armz are puney, pale as fuck 'n far from groovey
but jack'll be the next great white.. to play as Jawz in the new horror movie
this was aiight 5/10
jack's gettin a spankin, but'll bleed from the shankin
cause dawg, straiight up.. is where you'll never be in the rankins
coo not bad. 6/10
harder than me? nigga please.. i'm surprised u've stayed this long in the league
bitch, you've cum in 'n out so much.. you've prolly even fathered some seeds
was coo... cum line shit haha... was decent tho 5/10 p
i'll give ya a clue, bitch! ya not strong.. so the win, don't u persue it
so kid, ur guaranteed verse of the weak.. cause i'm plowin right through it
coo.... 5/10
'n ya mack battle was wack! thats just somethin u pretend to be
cause jack's got such a problem with losin.. this cat still has his virginity
lmao dope 8/10
a scary grin? ha! thats just the start.. i known to get very grim
so jack'll be gainin a lot.. or atleast a spot in one for me to burry him
coo good 6/10
instead of attack foolz, my crew just veiw past wack dudes
hoe! how are you on the scene??? when no one's even looking at you
haha coo 6/10
u know that i hate jerks! so i put jack in the ground 'n he ate dirt
but if cats land on their feet.. why does this pussy go down face first?
haha nice 6/10
you know i'm a amazing 'n raw, so don't be hatin the gawd
soon jack'll crack a smile for me.. when i'm finished dislocatin his jaw
this was nice 7/10
i'm hittin this fruit, him honest? naw, not him in the booth
cuz if jacks in a white lie.. thats just him sayin hes spittin the truth
good 6/10
i'm a hustla, homie! u a customa cronie! so heres some weed for free
but i'll still profit from ur bitch ass.. cuz ur dealer buys his weed from ME
lol coo 6/10 /b]
peeps keep callin! 'n since i got work, i traffick to keep on ballin
but jacks also traffickin.. or at least causes it cuz his car keeps on stallin
[b] not bad 5/10
seein ya pics, i think of school.. cause beatin this geek really isn't a shocker
'n fuck kickin his ass.. i'm a give jack a wedgy, swirly 'n shove him into a locker
cool not best line for closer tho. 5/10

overall: 91/150 (61%)
Overall this was a tight ass verse. real nice. real consitent. dope shit. good job son

Jack:
Alright, you dissed on my weedgame, now it's personal, lol.

I'm tellin ya, anything he's sellin aint nice, he aint a fellon with wealth
I saw Untold on the corner with some wack merchandise
he was sellin himself
lol coo 6/10
Get whored, I aint on his dick, but I sling better, honest kid
I could hit up the tittybar and see his girl do better on the strip
coo 5/10
Got nothin' on the Rip, cuz i'm dishin out the top grade, I deserve the win
That means if I ever serve some wack herb, it's cuz i'm servin him
lol this was nice 7/10
Straight servin wimps, I drop to excite the voters, so i'm bestin him
While his verses are such a wild boar I swear I saw Steve Irwin wrestlin 'em
not bad 4/10
I'm messin up wimps, cuz i'm a bad boy, this guys a geek, so bet I win
And send his bitch ass to the hospital, but we still won't see Met-A sin
coo good 6/10
Man i'm tearing this bitch, no doubt that my style's scary as shit
But I'm also digging your style... a fucking grave to burry it in
lmao that was tight 9/10
I'm murkin this lame, throwing punches to leave you hurtin in pain
With an uppercut that'll have ya airborn like ya moms gave birth in a plane
this was nice 7/10
I aim & bust, dis lame'll duck when I spray da pump & end dis nameless cunt
Only reason ya verses would be above mine is cuz they plane as fuck
nice good 6/10
I'm flowing phat, so when i'm blowing cats and hoe'in ya ass
It's No Doubt who wins, even Gwen Stefani knows it's Jack
haha coo 5/10
Son knows I smack foes, exposin me? Nah fuck this dumb hoe's babble
He tried rattin me out but I won't let his pest control the battle
lol this was nice 7/10
I blow n' rattle, this pud wants to make a stir but he's fake n' wack
So this puddle get stomped on, and he still won't make a splash
tight wordplay 7/10
The differance between us...
Girls loves me cuz I got fly wheels, while he stays fat sippin his shake
The similairity between us...
I'm swirlin the coolwhip on the road, he's swirlin the coolwhip... on his cake
ehh didn't really like this 4/10
Honest ya gay, ya girls plays that pushy shit, you play that wussy shit
But he dont need to take orders from his gf for us to see this pussy whipped
not bad 6/10
You stay on Nick's prick, you whore's blow and when he holds on ya dick
U could turn a kids show into a porno when you drop Nickelodeon on his lips
lmao a bit forced but i thought it was ill 7/10
To end this quick, i'll leave this geek on a crutch
But i'd hate to be brief
cuz I wouldn't wanna be on ya crotch
lol nice 6/10

overall:92/150 (61%)
you started out coo, but then middle went off. but killed it in end. Iunno dope ass verse

Quotables:
u like tortilla's punches?! i guess u think his voice is tight
cuz it ironic @ it bein the second best u seen.. but ur first choise to bite
'n ya mack battle was wack! thats just somethin u pretend to be
cause jack's got such a problem with losin.. this cat still has his virginity
v.s
Man i'm tearing this bitch, no doubt that my style's scary as shit
But I'm also digging your style... a fucking grave to burry it in
You stay on Nick's prick, you whore's blow and when he holds on ya dick
U could turn a kids show into a porno when you drop Nickelodeon on his lips

overall, fuckin' ill battle. iunno i got JTR over with ONE point. so I don't know if it'd be fair with one pt. I wanna call this a tie. but iunno. I think y'all should only count this vote if y'all need a tie breaker vote. or iunno it's up to you. But y'all saw my breakdown. this shit close. I'll check this in morning or something. but yea, can't really say more. dope battle. battle of the week def IMO. Up to y'all what you want to count this vote as.

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