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Old 09-01-06, 11:15 PM   #20
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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sinful
flow was pretty cool liked the multis however the rhyme scheme was pretty basic
i saw 2 or 3 nice lines a few played ones and some so so didnt really see any personals wiht the acception of his name line which was nice
cap city
work on that structure yor shits all over kinda hard to read lol
flow is not as good as sinfuls but not too bad not many multis however your metaphores won the battle in my opinion you came pretty witty it was close thoguh props
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