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Old 09-01-06, 11:19 PM   #42
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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alright sinnister
flow is on point for the most part except where you added too many syllables but this is text so it doesnt matter lol
punches nothing spctacular but prtty nice on a few of em no complints but u need to get some personals

yougone
idk what the hell you was on flow wise lol some of your lines dont flow at all kid but ohwell
lyrically barely below your opponent pretty close but u failed
up your rhyme scheme
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