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Old 09-02-06, 03:01 PM   #9
Brock Sampson
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R.R.


Nope fuck it..i'll cut threw ya dreams and hopes
so my sword'll put a new meaning to pokin some jokes
Broke fucker we can handle this here or the street
ya lights'll get knocked out,
..an payin the bill wont help you get back on ya feet
ya wack in the studio..cant even record a decent diss track
you'll get beat in the booth........of the diner you works at

-vs-

I'll trump this kid, pulling his cards, I'm shining and a said sinner
While Rae is lost, no one sees him... his hopes darker than the dead singer
I eclipse rays, breaking up light... now it's just a matter of how
But believe that your future's dark and insecure, left in a shadow of doubt


ok.....I think Rae got this...even tho there is a suspect line of bitin or just a horrible flip. It was MAD stretched anyway man. but the lines I quoted..I liked! The red C line was worded bad but the conept was OK. Comedian what happend yo!? I remeber readin some other verses that were niice? Prolly Rust huh!? The shadow of a doubt line was ight...played concept but i gave it to you..

We'll see what they say about the SUSPECT LINE...until then.

V/ Rae Report
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