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Old 09-02-06, 03:11 PM   #7
DaTrusHurtz
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Tortilla, stay in the league! Playoffs are almost here, no reason to sign out, this league is hardly a time commitment. I'm giving you a battle next week whether you like it or not lol. Get at me on PM or AIM if thats really a problem. Anyway...

NRG aint shit, a bitch with no witt ..he lacks the spice
this cat must be cold as hell tho ..with a career under the ice
seen something similar to this before.. wasn't feelin' it

wether you quit or not your done, i'm comin back n wiser
n foreal man i got ya back... on a platter for my appetizer
back lines are really played and the way ya used this was only average
i'll say it again and again, your outta here n thats a fact
meals are like my daily battles, n tortilla chip's a fuckin snack
feel ya coulda worded this better.. alright i guess

fuck a setup ..i'ma feed off'a ya rhyme ..dude, you got wack lines
so yea, meals are your daily battles ..and ya FULL of shit all the time
wording was a bit off here also, but decent feed

I feel both people coulda come better, but Tortilla was a bit more consistent and his closer was prolly the best line so he gets this.

Vote - Tortilla
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