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Old 09-02-06, 03:57 PM   #21
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
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IP:

Your girl's loose. It's charades, when she make you feel big
I call her Hannibal, the way she known for eating the kids
So... if you fail to please, she won't frown, cuz there's a line
She like dominoes..
.. she'll go down one at a time!
You know I'm lovin' this dime, cuz she a damn good rider man
Makin' me spray out that stringy stuff, like I was spiderman
Bitches all be hating cuz they know that I'm a mack, son
But I ain't pissed off<-- that's just a result of last nights action
Bitches say yes to me 24/7/365, don't play me yo
While that number above ^^ is your maybe/yes/no ratio
Bitches know my name by heart. All do, except for this chick
Who kept my name in her mouth all night...
... I guess she mistook me for a Dick

vs.

When you’re getting over ya girl, i’ll confess if you save me the bitchin’
That i’ve also been getting over her…… into some crazy positions
Ya can't move me with those ugly lines ya bust, you're done, stop.
The lines I bust across ya mom are less disgusting then the one's you drop
I’m telling ya b, girls love to go down and put their melon on me
Until I hit them with that sticky icky like I was sellin ‘em weed
How you gon’ see me? Your girls aren’t burnin’ hot
They’re more like tv’s, even a 3 year old could turn ‘em on
I get a breasy then bail, you can see me with tail
While Spul’s with those plywood bitches… flat, and easy to nail
My click’s catchin more damsels, every bitch know who we are
Cuz I’m known to give them a hotrod like I sold her a car
Ya heard me? In this mack battle, how the fuck you gon' murk me
When I make bitches gobble gobble like a fucking turkey?
No bro's testin, i'm a pimp, player, mack, whatever you wanna call it
Quick to make a bitch swallow Jack like a fucking alcoholic

I think JTR got this pretty easily. From Spul I really liked the maybe/yes/no ratio, that shit was funny. Hanibal and dominoes lines were also pretty good. Rest of ya verse was decent, but inconsistent at times. JTR didn't have many lines at all which I felt missed. My fav was the plywood line, that was really witty, I laughed at that shit. The bust lines and tv shit was really witty as well. Nice battle here, well worth the read.

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