Yo what up man... is been a while huh...
Yo what happend to the site man? been trying to log on for a month now...

Yeah it was pretty descent...
"so you need to take all ya undeveloped senses back to class and have a seat/
learn somethin new and then come back and compete"
I felt these last two lines the most...
the style here is different from others you wrote, and it's aight...
Seeing your others I could say you've evolved your style pretty good man.... peace...