the aptly named Ghetto Samurai said it all for me....so well put...*rolls eyes*..

...okay, so i felt the basis of this piece was very good...you approached it kind of fresh....adding depth to it, which was quite 'reader friendly', without a certain amount of 'peronal' depth to it...

....even though at times i felt it was a bit shaky....like you had just done it, and hadn't gone over it enough...what i mean is, some parts weren't as well executed as they could've been....but still, a meaningful piece....with a nice twist at the end...

....respecto...