As usual...a very nice piece...

....title is interesting...and adds that personal touch to the piece..as it seems more like it's coming from your perspective, your eyes...

...had a smoothish flow, even though i think it did rely at times a bit too much on rhyme, disrupting the flow a bit when it would've maybe been better just to go off and onto the edge...but still, nice, with emotions shown well...


liked it...respect...