Oh i liked this...

....it's not something you see...when someone does something so original and 'brave' in a writing sense..

...i know exactly what you mean when you say "wasn't sure whether it was a good piece, or some weird stuff that came out of my mind". That's usually the best thinig, when it just comes out your mind, naturally, instinctively almost - it might seem weird, but as long as you get what you're saying, and you feel good with it...then it's displaying your ability at it's rawest...and sometimes, actually most times, finest (most times when you go over it a couple of times after you written it)....

....so yeah, i read through it twice...was real nice....okay so i good give SOME technical criticism not a lot....but the piece overall was just so damn nice...using a 'story' that already exists..and depicting some of it's meanings, morals and all that through poetic form...


...nice thunda thigz...real nice...