...enter the master....
...the poetic devices used in this was pretty nice...somewhat transendentalistc...an oversol...''all of us are"...ya flow was nice...words a lil spimple..nah mean....your structure a lil elementary...somma ya metas is coo though....your similies is kinda nice...summa ya hyperbules was a lil off....still a coo piece...
you getta 7.3/10 ma....not bad....
hunnet
...exit master...