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Old 02-16-03, 10:36 PM   #3
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That was just pure illness. I was feeling every aspect of it except at one point you seemed to have lost the mind frame you were once in while writing this. All the rest was near flawless though. This coupling of lines really got me and I was like... Dude, you're getting a 10 or some shit. good drop.

The words they would read would leave shit split in their pants
My life’s been full of “cants” “your no good” “there’s” no chance”

^those 2

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