I'd tell you your concept was good if I could understand half the shit you said man!... lol... nah, I'm playing...

true some of it I didn't get... thas some complex ass style... it's like something I'd hear from the wu-tang forever cd or something... ya know...
Vocabulary was crazy, and the pace of the flow was pretty much on point...
I mean you hear it and the shit sounds hot... but if cats don't really get it... they ain't gon' feel it... like this cat above me, I really like your flow and vocab, should use that all the time, but chill with your concept and topic, do something that makes a bit more sence to the general public... nah what I mean...
Thas all, peace man, I' m out