nice drop dawg...you came blazin' wit this piece
you have a very good vocab, a good grasp on the english language and it shows in your rhymes....elevated lexis that rhymes well isn't found all that ofetn but you have captured the skill of rhyming it.
your flow is good for the most parts but from time to time i feel you need to use more multi-syllable rhymes just to make it that little smoother
you have good metaphors and imagery thrrought and that is what seperates you from an average emcee, you ability to spit abstract rhymes.....these few lines were sick
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a pre-historic phonetic metaphoric glorifyin' tha chorus adore it cause before us::
was now erraticated peeps who lacked educated rap in tha streets::
So strap in ya seat's fastend tha beat's blastin' I speak fasion::
and reap what I sow wit action packed passion I flow unique syllabols of speech::
Then blow ya mind away reload expload, I'll find a way to be told::
there's another day for shade cause sun-shine's my paid check for a one-of-a-kind-rhyme::
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