Right,

So Solid:
I'm not sure whats going on here. Halfway through you start givin excusses for why you're wack??!! You need more confidence in your rhymin, sure you'll get better wit time, but don't waste precious lines in a battle tellin everybody.
Anyway, before this section, and after this section, you had the verse sorted with the flow. You now need to concentrate on improvin multis and includin some punches (my problem too). Keep practising!

Kawtic:
I have to say, i thought that was pretty ill. I thought the start was hot. I liked the line "I continue with lyrical Elevation, my ryhmes like water in the sun as they rise with Evaporaton", and i thought it was better than So solid. In this case i liked the fact it wasn't so in your face.

So,

Vote = Kawtic

P.s.
As been mentioned previosly, So solid sort out the grammer, it doesn't do you any favours.

Peace