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aww man... this was deep... loved the imagery... this one's pretty original dawg... I would have never thought of writing something like this... the concept itself makes this a hot piece... and you had that strong vocab to back it up...
Very complex, but it makes sense.... the flow itself could of been a bit better though...
Let me ask you man, how you think up a topic like this?
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