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Old 02-20-03, 09:40 PM   #6
Concise
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the months of creation spent facen another
two sons with eyes un-open,placed inside a hopeful mother

Notice the 'two'.. I sense a twin brother...

relying upon the breath passed through the lungs of life
steadfast in limited mobility,still striving with steps to survive

dope

my heart beats,i'am alive but left blind to each new day
hands and feet reach internally for freedom,but solid walls restrain

hotter!

pushing against the curtains grains with all my mustered strength
just another month to wait,escape my brothers fate and see the world

If you dint see the meaning in this everyone. Kid had a twin brother, who died during birth. Deep!

so i send subliminal impulses answered by uncertain questions
"is this the pending moment?" "or a message emerging unclear?"
fearing the sincierity of intentions but my minutes are finished here

wow!


Well, i finaly actualy read a whole peice! This was dope!
No question about it...

Cise
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