Sup nun..
I was really feelin this piece a lot, maybe cuz I, like a lot of writers prolly can, relate to it so much..The frustration described in the beginning...Also I thought you made very real points and put em into words and rythem flawlessly..Like:

>I want you to feel what i feel, but youll never feel me
you will jus read what i write and live in my imagery

Also you just took the imagery the extra lengths while staying on topic, just sparked my imagination and took an approach I wasn't even expecting. Like in this line:

>the reality behind the letters i trace, leavin no space
margins are non-existant cuz a peice of my mind took their place

Extremely tight bit right there.
Some other lines I liked were:

>they say a pictures worth a thousand words
well, these words are worth thousands of moments
where i was tryin to force my innards out till i finally jus exploded
picture my pain, joy, sorrow, laughter, remorse, uncertainty and regret
tryin to break out of the dimminutive figures which contain them, restrained by the alphabet

Very, very ill piece I thought. Even the intro was good, kind of set the scene for the concept.
Anyway, I thought you came nice, with more potential then most these other newbies put together.
Stay Up and keep writin! You're very talented.
Peace n propz.