Sup endo..
I thought this piece was tight..In a short time, you transferred a lot of emotion to the reader, broke em off some of what you were feeling..Very nice imagery and symbolism in this.

>place my heart by a red fern and wait
here it will stay,and prey its not too late

I got sort of a pit in my stomache when I read that cuz it made me think about a lot of things in my own life..Even though you had a specific someone or something in mind for it in this piece.

Very nice piece all n all.
I felt it lots.
Keep blessin us, n stay up.
Peace n propz.