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Old 02-21-03, 11:00 AM   #6
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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ah Varentao.
Its been too long.

Your pieces always have this dark mysteriousness in symbolism to them..so much that it can be easy to read them and not take them for as much as they're worth..
They always possess this written quality thats just so unique..say if someone was to give me 50 poems with no authors I'd be able to tell which one was yours. But anyway, this was a great piece..great execution of the concept..I really liked the first stanza..

>Tame death in form of raw life
Buried deep in ones heart
Destiny lying at it's feet
In colliding worlds of dice

Amazingly written...really. Kind of saying, death is always right there next to life..and at anytime one force could over power another.

>Lessons forgotton, teachers all shot
Flames rise, to bring darkness so real

^just like what Necro (he's great, isnt he) said. What seems significant now is really meaningless in the long run. Damn let me stop babbling. Overall tight Piece, V..Sorry if im late to peep it. You're a very talented poet and I hope the likes of your work graces this forum for long time.
Peace n propz.

Oh I meant to ask you, what inspires you? You've always had a wide range of concepts.
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