Damm... yo man, I haven't really read much from u in the past, but damm, reading this, I think I should have...
I thought this was a hot piece...
not to long and to the point... never really trailing off bout other things...
How do I put this... your topic is not really difficult to understand, but the way your write it you make it seem more complex... I'm feeling how u put your words down... the rhyme were hot...
"Like girls on p.m.s. the cycle never ceases/
Being on top is lonely they say the problem increases "t
this rhyme stuck out for me.... Keep it up man, peace