well I ain't a leader... but still, let me give you my opinion...

whatever you do man... keep posting and reading from other, more experienced peeps in this site, so you can get better... you know... so you can see how it's done... cause dawg... your skills right now need mad fucking work....
First of all... your basically saying the same thing in every rhyme... just worded differently... you got a tight flow, and that you hot...
but you ain't really showing that though...
Second... your flow aint' smooth at all, it's way off man...
And try to talk about something other than you skills... show them, not just say you got'em...
Just keep working on it man... write on the cipher forum, that's good practice, and here too...
Thas it then, peace