Thread: quick verse
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Old 02-21-03, 07:05 PM   #5
The 13th Apostles
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This had nice flow, but the wordplay was pretty simplistic...Thats the only real thing i suggest you work on...concepts, flow, and rhyme scheme it's self you've got down pretty well...but your usage of words needs work.....

Tight spit tho dogg.....

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