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"My 2 Cents..."
IP:
This was an aight drop...not the most skilled I've seen in my day...but a little work, and you'll do just fine.
The bar layout isn't the easiest to follow, thus..the flow wasn't that great...try to make all of your bars pretty much the same length..no more than 16 syllables, no less than 13...and your flow should stay constant...
Just some help...
Nice drop tho...
P.E.A.C.E.
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