yo this topic is ill.
i liked you wordplay and multi's
flow coulda had more structure,maybe i didnt catch it
some quotables i liked too:
Quote:
he spends hours upon hours putting words in a section
just to throw them away because of his search for perfection
he knows the effects, yet he wants to be known as the best
so he takes criticism to heart, like theres a hole in his chest
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i was feeling those lines.nice imagery yo
this was an overall really nice piece
i give it a 7.5 or a 8/10
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